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writing notebooks

28/2/2014

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Among writers there is a long tradition of keeping diaries and notebooks, and it's fascinating how differently writers use them. For some, the notebook is a place to do exercises and warm up the mind ready for a day of writing. Other writers do all their work in notebooks, while still others use them to keep track of the important facts relating to a piece of work, for example the dates of birth and details of characters, the timeline of events or the connections between settings.

It can be fascinating to read these notebooks, especially when it lets you track the gestation of a piece of work you have admired. Below are two writers' notebooks which I've read and drawn inspiration from in my own development as a writer:
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On the left, George Eliot's notebook containing some of her planning for Middlemarch (a record of the votes cast during the election scene which is a pivotal point for the book, and a rough map of the locations of her novel). Above, Virginia Woolf's diary, in which she discussed both her life and her writing (here, her current book's progress and a dinner taking place with friends that evening).
At the start of my new project I began to keep my own writing notebook, which is something I hadn't really done before. For me, the notebook was a practical decision at first. I had just finished working on The Last Descendants, which had taken almost a decade. Over those ten years I had accumulated a collection of notes which was serviceable, but unwieldy: it filled boxes, books and folders, was half paper-based and half stored on my computer, and lacked any kind of systematic organisation. I knew how to work from these notes, but it certainly wasn't the most efficient process... Putting these notes aside, I was also struck with a feeling of starting again from the beginning. With a series, there is a good deal of work that doesn't have to be redone - indeed, shouldn't really be redone. The books' particular world (by which I mean the whole signature of the book and its approach to reality, its mood and vision, not just the setting) needs to be reworked in each book as a kind of theme and variations, not remade, otherwise the series won't share a distinctive stamp and colour, won't really be a continuous narrative at all. After finishing The Last Descendants, I was in a very different situation. I had not only to begin a new piece of work, but first to lay the foundations of that work and its distinctive world. So I needed somewhere to capture all the ideas, passing thoughts, research and planning that would eventually become the new book.

I began my notebook just as I was finishing The Heart at War. At first, I didn't write in it every day, but only when ideas appeared or when I had some specific research to record. Gradually, though, I found myself writing more and more in it, and now it's become an essential part of my writing routine. I begin by writing the date at the top of the page, and here's what can be found inside:

- Each day's plans. At the start of every morning I record what I'm going to work on, how long it might take, any practical or non-writing tasks like this blog post or a trip to a reference library which I want to find time to work on, and any research I'm planning to continue with or pick up that day.
- Any problems which arise, e.g. a scene that seems poorly worked-out when I come to write it or a character whose motivations need rethinking. I also note down any possible solutions, so that I can leave these and come back to them later.
- Fragments of narrative, dialogue and description to include in the book. Also some drafts of sections of the story.
- Lists of titles. I usually find a working title for a book early on, but this time it took me about ten pages of notes! Chapter titles also take some thinking.
- Timelines of the order of events in a particular scene or character's life.
- Family trees and character lists.
- Rough maps and charts.
- Research notes.
- A running bibliography of all the sources I've used so far.
- A running reading list of all the books I want to read in the future.
- A running word count that lets me see what I've achieved each day and whether I'm on track.
- Field notes on locations I've visited.
- A record of all the important phone calls and meetings I have with my agent, editors and other people who work with me on the books, including what we've discussed and what the next steps are - it can be surprisingly easy to forget when these took place and what you agreed on!
- Notes on interviews, articles and books which I've read and which might help inform my vision as a writer, or which I want to think in more detail about. For instance, during the last month I've made notes on Salman Rushdie's ideas about the writer in the world, gleaned from a fascinating interview I watched last year and returned to recently; a podcast with Louis de Bernieres on history and magical realism; an interview with Kiran Desai about the method of construction of The Inheritance of Loss; and several articles about particular themes in 20th century history.
- Then, at the end of each day, a record of what I've worked on, how much I managed to achieve, and what the next day's plans are.

And here's what my writing notebook looks like. There were a few practical requirements: generally, a writer's notebook has to be the right size to fit in a handbag or pocket but thick enough to store a substantial number of notes (as well as strong enough to withstand being carted around for months while said notes are being written!):
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This is actually volume one of the writing notebook, which is now finished and stored away on the shelf beside my desk, already full of notes. But volume two is identical: I've clearly become quite conservative about the whole process. I've even got a matching volume three stored away, because the notebook looked like it was going to be discontinued in the shop where I bought it and I wanted all the notebooks I use for this book to have the same look and feel. Who says writers are superstitious...?

How about you? Do you keep a notebook or journal? Let me know your thoughts in the comments below.
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the challenges of writing about the past

4/2/2014

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How does a writer approach the past? This is a question I've been asking myself a good deal recently. The new book I'm working on takes as its material both the recent past, events which are reference points in my own memory, and the further-off past, which I haven't experienced first-hand at all. Nearly all novels are in some sense historical, though they may not be labelled that way. Since stories deal with cause and effect, with the development of events, you are forced back into at least the recent past as soon as you begin to tell them. Even writing about the future requires you to look at the present with a historical eye. As a young writer, writing historically is a particular challenge because what is far-off past for you may be a personal memory for many of your readers. For instance, I was born a few months before the Berlin Wall came down. The first event of global significance that I witnessed as an adult, technically, was the 2008 financial crisis, history so recent it is hardly history at all. But on the other hand, the past is not something that vanishes. There are many events that are part of a collective cultural memory which I can claim to share: the two world wars, the age of prosperity in which my immediate ancestors grew up, the financial upheavals that preceded this one, the international conflicts which were the background to my childhood. Since these events set the terms for the world I inhabit, I can't avoid addressing them in my writing.

I was reminded beautifully of the complexity of trying to write about the past by a book I picked up last week as part of my research: The Age of Extremes by the historian Eric Hobsbawm, an account of the years 1914-1991. In his book, which is of necessity a partly 'autobiographical endeavour' (he was born in 1917), Hobsbawm has many things to say about how we write about the recent past. Our perspectives, he warns, may be fundamentally different depending on our moment of birth. For historians of his generation:


'We are part of this century. It is part of us. Readers who belong to another era, for instance the student entering university at the time this is written, for whom even the Vietnam War is prehistory, should not forget this.'


It's an important caution that there is a trap the young may fall into, the trap of looking at the recent past as 'prehistory', when for other generations it is part of their very reality. Not having inhabited the past, knowing it only from a jumbled series of names and dates picked up during childhood, we risk becoming seriously muddled about its significance. Hobsbawm talks about an excellent university student he encountered, who asked him whether the name Second World War meant that there had been a first one. Similarly, I have been asked the following questions at various times by my school students: whether Shakespeare was a Victorian or modern; whether the Second World War was in the 1980s; and (while reading a book at least a hundred years old) whether I also used to be scared by the constant risk of being hit with a cane or ruler when I was at school. None of these questions were jokes, and the students who asked them were successful and conscientious ones; it's not a matter of intelligence or common sense, but of an understandable confusion. To these students, most of the past is a sort of indeterminate swamp, something whose causality is difficult to get a handle on, probably because they don't know enough about it yet to be clear on how it relates to their immediate present, if at all. It's certainly hard to make a coherent narrative of the past that we haven't experienced and know very little about: all its events become the same and, worse, risk looking completely irrelevant.


Hobsbawm movingly describes the way the past cannot be forgotten so easily by those who have lived it:


'For historians of my generation and background, the past is indestructible... because public events are part of the texture of our lives. They are not merely markers in our private lives, but what has formed our lives, private and public. For this author the 30 January 1933 is not simply an otherwise arbitrary date when Hitler became Chancellor of Germany, but a winter afternoon in Berlin when a fifteen-year-old and his younger sister were on the way home from their neighbouring schools in Wilmersdorf to Halensee and, somewhere along the way, saw the headline. I can see it still, as in a dream.'


I find this very moving. This short paragraph, in an instant, dropped me into that same winter afternoon in Berlin, that same dream of memory which makes the past a living and a personal thing. And, in a way, I - a 'reader who belongs to another era' - can be said to have experienced that past too as part of my own reality, through the force of Hobsbawm's words, his personal story. This account reminds me, too, that if there is one moment of the recent past that the students I've taught have never seen as 'prehistory', that moment, for some reason, is the Second World War. The students have no difficulty in seeing the people of Blitzed London or Nazi Germany as real and 'modern', their lives as important (which is probably why the particular boy who asked me about it placed the events somewhere in the '80s, a couple of decades before his own birth, thus underlining its importance in his view of the world and his own life).


Where does this immediacy come from? Perhaps it is a property of the way the time period is taught. In trying to make some kind of sense of the Second World War, teachers often seem to turn to literature and art. So my students have 'witnessed' this particular time not through a series of names and dates but through the words of people like that fifteen-year-old boy Hobsbawm remembers being, people like them, both eyewitnesses (Anne Frank) and characters created by writers from historical accounts (Morris Gleitzman, John Boyne). Similarly, I've seen war poetry and novels about the time succeed in making the First World War real. When students that I've taught, half a generation younger than me, have been given the privilege of witnessing the past through others' eyes, it remains for them urgently alive and, I would argue, becomes part of them too, at least in the sense that it is now a part of their consciousness and understanding of the world. Surely it is this property of the past that is our way into history as writers, the path we must follow when we try to do justice to past lives. The way the small, individual story intertwines with the large events of history, both shaped by them and colouring them, altering the way they are remembered, is the thing that makes the past a reality, and is common to all our lives.


Hobsbawm believes that this sense of the immediacy of the past risks being lost altogether:


'At the end of this century it has for the first time become possible to see what a world would be like in which the past, including the past in the present, has lost its role, in which the old maps and charts which guided human beings, singly and collectively, through life no longer represent the landscape through which we move, the sea on which we sail. In which we do not know where our journey is taking us, or even ought to take us. This is the situation with which a part of humanity must already come to terms at the end of the century, and more will have to in the new millennium. However, by then it may have become clearer where humanity is going than it is today. We can look backward over the road that brought us here, and this is what I have tried to do in this book.'


That last sentence, to me, could be a manifesto for all writers, even those - like me - who began their adult lives in the new millennium. How can the past ever cease to be a part of our present? No reality of our current situation - no financial crisis, no political upheaval, no war - can make sense without the long perspective of the road behind it, and perhaps it is this which sends young writers like me into history, now more than ever, in search of other lives and other voices: it is only with their help that we can make sense of the time we inhabit. To 'look backward over the road that brought us here' could be what we are all trying to do in all our books.
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