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(re)writing

25/3/2014

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I'm often asked how many drafts a book goes through before it's published. There are actually two separate editing processes involved in writing a book. The one that most people are familiar with is the work an author does with a publisher's editor. This is what turns a manuscript (a novel the author thought was finished) into a book (a novel which is actually finished!). However, before a piece of work even sees an editor it will already have been rewritten, probably several times. The major edits I make on my own work nearly always run into double figures before my agent or my publishers even see the manuscript. This might sound painstaking, and it is - but it's also, to me, one of the best parts of the writing process. Of course there are sections which just seem to come to life of their own accord. They flow onto the page, and appear effortless forever afterwards, hardly needing any editing at all. But much of the writing which, in retrospect, I'm most proud of, only attained this 'effortless' feeling through careful work.

There's a commonly-cited writing 'rule' that all good writing is rewriting. I think this is true, with some caveats. Writing a book is like stepping into a labyrinth, and it's crucial not to get lost in the process. Each draft has to take the piece of work closer to a finished manuscript. Sometimes, rewriting no longer takes a manuscript forward, only in various sideways directions, or - at worst - back the way you came. So, particularly when trying to get a first draft finished, writers have to be strict with themselves. A large part of the rewriting process is knowing when to rewrite, and when to stop.

Otherwise, I think all rewriting is probably a good thing. I thought it would be fun to share a few pictures of the rewriting work I've been doing over the last few days, because my chaotic, scrawled draft really illustrates just how much thinking and rethinking goes into a finished book! This is what nearly all the authors' manuscripts that I've seen look like, from A. A. Milne to Virginia Woolf. Apparently no one is immune from the need to rewrite...
What I'm working on here is the first quarter of my new book. This section, about 20,000 words, will eventually be some kind of Part One. I've spent several months researching and writing it, trying out different structures and narrators and plot lines, and making quite major changes along the way. Now the story has begun to gain momentum, I decided it was time to look at in more detail.Here's one of the early pages of the draft. There was a lot to add here, some of it from other versions of the story. The good thing about working on paper is that you can see all the different alternatives you considered - and if you want to rewrite your rewriting you can also do that!
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On this page, by contrast, there was a lot to take away. Often, in early drafts, you explain too much, or say the same thing in three different ways - what my agent, Simon, describes as 'scaffolding'. In general, cutting this material out of a draft is like pruning a tree: the whole thing comes back stronger and with a clearer shape. Or something like that...

More crossing out. Also tea and biscuits. I'm pleased with this page now, but a lot of it had to go.
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But sometimes you need a whole new paragraph. The new writing on the left was part of an earlier draft - I just couldn't find a place for it. On paper, it was easier to see where those sentences, which were necessary somewhere, would naturally fit in.
What these pictures show, I think, is that writing is as laborious as any craft, and as laborious for more experienced writers as it is for new writers. You just end up editing for different things. When I first began writing, I used to go through my work for stylistic mistakes - repeated words, clumsy phrasing, hackneyed ways of putting things. Now, I automatically edit for these things as I write a sentence. But I end up rewriting now for other reasons - to bring out a theme or a detail of character, alter the emphasis, sharpen up a series of linked images or a moment which is meant to have some rhetorical effect but falls flat on the page. What these pictures show is that writing is not a mystical process, not only a matter of inspiration and ideas. A large part of working as a writer is about how you deliver on that inspiration, through a process of gradual refinement and improvement, like a sculptor blocking out the shape of his work in a piece of marble, then gradually hewing out the figure concealed within, using smaller and smaller tools.

Kiran Desai, whose The Inheritance of Loss is a masterpiece, worked on it for ten years. Ten years is longer than most people in the world will ever spend on any single thing, except perhaps on their human relationships: a marriage, a partnership, a friendship, the raising of a child. Desai has spoken movingly about the sacrifice and difficulty involved. But she's also spoken about the rewards. There's a high level of detail and craftsmanship about the (re)writing process, but there's also something magical about seeing a book, by degrees, come closer to your idea of it. It never quite gets there, but it approaches...
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what I've been reading so far in 2014

17/3/2014

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After so many posts about writing, I thought it was time for a post about reading! Back in November, I shared my reading list for 2013. There were a few things I noticed. Firstly, although I'd read plenty of books, most of those books were novels - there were very few short stories and memoirs on the list, hardly any non-fiction that wasn't research-related, and no new poetry. This is a common trend in our reading; it's certainly reflected in the way in which these books sell compared to novels. And secondly, like many readers I wasn't very good at reading books that were completely up-to-date - books actually published in 2011, 2012 and 2013. Of course, there's a benefit to dropping behind the publishing trends by a couple of years: when the fireworks are over and the smoke clears, it's easier to see which books are still worth reading. But at the same time, there's also a huge bonus to reading a book in the moment to which it truly belongs - and this was something I was often missing. I resolved to do something about it in 2014!

So I thought I'd post an update and let you know how my year in reading is progressing so far. Also included are some recommendations, because I seem to have been lucky in the books I've picked up so far this year...

Eleanor Catton, The Luminaries (Little, Brown: 2013)
So the year got off to an epic start. I began The Luminaries in January, during my last couple of days' holiday over Christmas and New Year, and it's an excellent book to read on the sofa, on a rainy afternoon, with a cup of hot chocolate, etc. This is partly because the way Catton establishes the world of the novel - not just the setting of the mining town Hokitika but the particular quality of vision and 'feel' of the narrative - is stunning and totally immersive. It's also because the narrative is a long, intricate one best suited to concentrated bouts of reading. In fact, I lost the threads of the mystery slightly when I went back to work in January - and I'm planning to reread the book later this year. The Luminaries is definitely worth the time investment, if only to witness an exciting writer taking the novel form and trying to make it once again new.

Louis de Bernieres, Captain Corelli's Mandolin (Vintage: 1993)
I'd read this already, but so long ago that it was like a new book to me. (Sorry, Mr de Bernieres. That's a reflection on my own powers of memory, not your writing.) I love magical realism, and this was de Bernieres' first non-magical-realist novel, but it's still got something of the mood of the genre - bright, ornate and slightly larger than life. Simply put, it's about the impact of war on a Greek island. It's also a love story. It's been criticised for its handling of the historical material, and de Bernieres' narrator is certainly opinionated and forthright (about, for example, the communist organisation ELAS, which he presents relentlessly from one side). But as a story, it absolutely works. This was the book that every British reader had about their person in the 1990s (Hugh Grant famously read it in the closing scene of Notting Hill, which pretty much sums up its place in British culture at the time). I think it also deserves to endure and enjoy a new life in the 21st century, because it's that fundamental thing: a great story, well told - and the discussion about how it presents history is one worth having.

Jhumpa Lahiri, Unaccustomed Earth (Knopf: 2008) and George Saunders' short stories (The New Yorker)
I have a special affection for books published the same year my first book came out. I'd read a few of Lahiri's stories before, but Unaccustomed Earth is the first collection I've read as a whole and it was excellent. Lahiri is a quiet writer. I mean this as the highest of praise. Her particular concerns are the emotional realities and relationships of her characters, and how these develop over time. In the title story, a widowed father visits his lonely daughter and small grandson in her new home and tends her garden. She is vacillating over inviting him to live with her. Meanwhile, the elderly father is reluctant to tell his daughter about a new love affair. The story follows the two of them as they agonise, hesitate and eventually come to some level of understanding. This is typical of the collection, which does what short stories do best - build a world in just a few pages, and make you care enough to feel its beauty and intensity, the tragedy of its reversals and the joy of its resolutions.

I've also been reading George Saunders' short stories this year, and it's interesting to compare them. The two writers are pretty much opposites on the surface (though it might be worth questioning how different two writers can be, on a world scale, when they have cut their teeth on MFA courses 300 miles apart in the United States). But certainly, the lenses through which they focus their stories are different ones: Lahiri's is the slightly disjointed world of families of Bengali origin living in America and (occasionally) Britain; Saunders' is the odd, futuristic realm of capitalist society gone wild. But both writers have that particular quality which is at the heart of fine writing: the quality of making the specific moment in time and space real - the return of a dead aunt, slightly decomposing, to a family's living room, in Saunders' case, or the peace of a grandfather reading his grandson The Cat in the Hat in accented, careful English, in Lahiri's. Because here's the thing: by making such moments real, both writers make them at the same time transcendent and universal, moments which have something of relevance and urgency to say to us as readers. In novels you get the long view of cause and effect, the punch of an ending which has been 400 pages in the making, but in short stories these moments of transcendence are particularly concentrated and intense. Seek out both Lahiri and Saunders if you can (it won't be hard; they're both flavour of the month right now!). Or if you only have time for one or two stories, I would suggest 'Unaccustomed Earth' and 'Sea Oak'...

Kate Atkinson, Life After Life (Transworld: 2013)
Another book that has been very much in the news, at least in the UK, and at the time of writing has won the Costa Award and was shortlisted for the Women's Prize. The book is based on the premise that Ursula Todd, the heroine, is born over and over again in 1910, living many possible lives (and suffering many possible deaths). Atkinson uses this idea, which is not in itself original, to do something very unique: to show how a character (and a family) alters slightly according to the paths they choose to take. It's clever, because in real life there is no 'might have been' - our progression through time becomes a single line. So if we make a mistake - marry the wrong person, say, or go to the wrong air-raid shelter on the wrong day during the Blitz, both of which are things that happen to Ursula - that choice assumes a reality, becomes the only reality. But in fiction it is perfectly possible to create a character, unmake them, change their choices or their odds, make them again - and for each version of that character to be 'real' in the sense that we as readers fully believe in them. Which is what Atkinson manages, and it's a significant achievement, as well as a thoroughly gripping story.

Michael Sandel, Justice: What's the Right Thing to Do? (Farrar, Straus and Giroux: 2009)
Plenty of people have attended Michael Sandel's course of lectures on justice (14,000 Harvard students, apparently, plus about 5 million YouTube viewers). This is sort of the book of the film. In it, Michael Sandel takes contemporary moral problems and uses them as a way in to various questions of ethics that have troubled moral and political philosophers over the last two millenia, with a particular focus on the idea of justice and a just society. It's an incredibly absorbing read, and easy enough for non-philosophers to get into the arguments - reading this, you will have occasional uncanny moments when you realise why you think what you think about a particular ethical issue, and also moments when your own views suddenly need re-examining. I'd thoroughly recommend it, but like everyone else you've probably already read it...

And also worth a mention are Mary Taylor Simeti, On Persephone's Island (Vintage: 1986) - a memoir by an American writer living in Palermo, which is an absorbing account of the rhythm of the seasons during one year on a historical estate in rural Sicily - and Eric Hobsbawm, The Age of Extremes (Abacus: 1995) - an excellent history of the 20th century by one of its most prominent historians, also interesting for its insights on what it means to both live through and write about history. Both are books I picked up for their loose relation to the work I'm doing on my new book. But both, I think, deserve recommendations in their own right.

So there you go: 2014 so far has been a good year in reading. A memoir, some non-fiction, some short stories and two books published in 2013 - I'm not doing too badly with my resolutions after all. As you can probably tell from the way I've written about them, all of these books come recommended. Let me know what you've been reading in the comments below!
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